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In section "一、如何解决一个问题--引出机器解决问题"

Original: "按照大家的知识,都知道这是一个一元一次方程(y = kx + b能解决的"

Issue: Missing closing parenthesis and improper punctuation.

Suggestion: Change to "按照大家的知识,都知道这是一个一元一次方程 (y = kx + b) 能解决的"

In section "二、如何让机器总结出算法"

Original: "我们认为地设计一个算法结构"

Issue: Typo, 认为 should be 人为.

Suggestion: Change 认为 to 人为.

Original: "我们加入碰巧直接设计成了y = kx + b"

Issue: Typo, 加入 should be 假如.

Suggestion: Change 加入 to 假如.

Original: "我们将我们这条直线的的几个点代入到这个方程"

Issue: Extra word 的.

Suggestion: Remove the extra 的, change to "我们将我们这条直线的几个点代入到这个方程".

Original: "那我们就可以假设这个模型基本满足了我们以后有一个x, 要求着图中线上任意一点的y值"

Issue: Unclear and ungrammatical sentence.

Suggestion: Rephrase to“那我们就可以假设这个模型基本满足了我们以后的需求:有一个x, 要求图中线上任意一点的y值”

In section "五、继续:深度神经网络(续"

Original: "每个节点输出的值都需要经过Sigmod(∑(Wn * x + Bn))"

Issue: Misspelling of activation function "Sigmoid".

Suggestion: Change Sigmod to Sigmoid.

In section "一、如何解决一个问题--引出机器解决问题"

Original: "按照大家的知识,都知道这是一个一元一次方程(y = kx + b能解决的"

Issue: Missing closing parenthesis and improper punctuation.

Suggestion: Change to "按照大家的知识,都知道这是一个一元一次方程 (y = kx + b) 能解决的"

In section "二、如何让机器总结出算法"

Original: "我们认为地设计一个算法结构"

Issue: Typo, 认为 should be 人为.

Suggestion: Change 认为 to 人为.

Original: "我们加入碰巧直接设计成了y = kx + b"

Issue: Typo, 加入 should be 假如.

Suggestion: Change 加入 to 假如.

Original: "我们将我们这条直线的的几个点代入到这个方程"

Issue: Extra word 的.

Suggestion: Remove the extra 的, change to "我们将我们这条直线的几个点代入到这个方程".

Original: "那我们就可以假设这个模型基本满足了我们以后有一个x, 要求着图中线上任意一点的y值"

Issue: Unclear and ungrammatical sentence.

Suggestion: Rephrase to“那我们就可以假设这个模型基本满足了我们以后的需求:有一个x, 要求图中线上任意一点的y值”

In section "五、继续:深度神经网络(续"

Original: "每个节点输出的值都需要经过Sigmod(∑(Wn * x + Bn))"

Issue: Misspelling of activation function "Sigmoid".

Suggestion: Change Sigmod to Sigmoid.
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